To be successful I needed to use verbs to describe actions, adjectives, and select language features e.g. similes, onomatopoeia, alliteration etc.
Reflection: I could use onomatopoeia easily like rustle, and whoosh. It was hard to write it
like a poem but I managed with just a little bit of help. My favourite line is "...in the autumn months are magical like a beautiful rainbow."
Teacher Comment: Well done Brooklyn, you used similes which were relevant and gave lovely pictures in my mind of what you could see. Some fabulous language choices. A super effort. Mrs Templeton