Learning to Describe Autumn Leaves

This term I have been learning to describe a scene
To be successful I needed to use verbs to describe actions, adjectives, and select language features e.g. similes,  onomatopoeia, alliteration etc.


Reflection:  I could use onomatopoeia easily like rustle, and whoosh.  It was hard to write it
like a poem but I managed with just a little bit of help.    My favourite line is "...in the autumn months are magical like a beautiful rainbow."

Teacher Comment:  Well done Brooklyn, you used similes which were relevant and gave lovely pictures in my mind of what you could see.  Some fabulous language choices.  A super effort.  Mrs Templeton